Hmmmmm..... I dunno whether i am doing the smart thing by posting this but this is something thats very close to me and i wanted to share it with everyone. A lot of people might not like it and some may even think that the stuff here is very childish but please understand that this was written by 13 or 14 year old kid. But still i would love to know what you all think of it. So, here goes
1. Teri galiyon se duur ja raha hoon main,
Teri vafaon ke phool liye ja raha hoon main,
Ho mubarak tumhe yeh baharein,
Patjhad apne sang liye ja raha hoon main.
2. Tumhe chahna meri bhool thi,
Tumhe dhoondna meri bhool thi,
Jaanta tha tum patthar ki murat ho,
Tumhe poojna meri bhool thi.
3. Purani roshni aur nayi roshni mein fark itna hai,
Purani roshni aur nayi roshni mein fark itna hai,
isse saahil nahi milta, usse kinara nahi milta.
4. Saare zamane se aage hoon,
Guzre zamane se aage hoon,
Main kahan hoon yeh pata nahi,
Par kal jahan tha uss makam se aage hoon.
5. Jaise ishq mein hota hai,
Jaise husn mein hota hai,
Waise hi hum khak nasheenon ke,
Thokar pe zamaana hota hai.
6. Dosti rishta nahi,
Mazhab hai, imaan hai,
Yaar ki yaari khuda hai,
Toh dushmani shaitan hai.
7. Kisi se kya shikva karein,
Yeh toh kismat ki baat hai,
Jinhe hum dil se chahte the,
Woh toh gairon ke paas hain.
8. Mere chehre se kafan hata do,
Aadat hai mujhe muskurane ki,
Intezaar kar raha hoon main apne,
Mehboob ke aane ki.
9. Tum doli mein jaana,
Hum paidal hi aayenge,
Sharab ko banayenge apni humsafar,
Aur tumko bhool jaayenge.
10. Kiya tha pyar humne bhi,
Yeh humein hi maloom hai,
Zindagi mein aane se pehle hi,
Woh humein rusva kar gaye.
11. Tum meri zindagi mein aa na saki,
Mayyat par aa jana,
Lash intezar karegi,
Kaffan chada jaana.
12. Zindagi ka kya bharosa,
Iss jahan mein doston,
Maut peeche lagg gayi,
Jis din se paidaish hui.
And Finally....
She was beautiful, she was shy,
I still remember her, don't know why.
I could see her gleam in the sunshine,
I even tried to give her a smile.
But she had already crossed a mile.
I know i was late,
But then couldnt she wait ?
She had the look of an angel,
And the sweet innocence was her only jewel.
Never could i see her again,
Its passed winter, summer and rain.
I only hope she comes back someday,
For, then I'll surely have something to say.
She was beautiful, she was shy.
I still remember her, don't know why ?
Ok, let the brickbats come in...
TERROR KA BAAP KAUN ???
16 years ago
11 comments:
well as i dont understand hindi very well i would say that i liked the one u wrote in english !!
and iam sure the one u wrote in hindi is sooo nice
coz a talented writer like u doesnt need compliments
from anyone ..
keep it up dude ;)
This guy's a jerk attimes.. (make that a hell lot of times)!!! How else will you describe someone who thinks that these gems are not worth enough to be showcased to the world to see them in all their glory???
Actually, come to think of it, he is right. These gems are not really worth 'enough' to be showcased to the world.. They are PRICELESS.
He might kill me for doin' this without asking him first.. but I think it's gonna be an injustice to his writing prowess, intellectual skills and most importantly to his friends if I don't share another of his gems, one of the few which he may have thought 'not good enough' to be given a place here.. and which incidentally happens to be my favourite.
So here it goes people, for u all, who love this guy as much as I do..
Safar mein dhoop toh hogi,
Jo chal sako to chalo..
Sabhi hain bheid mein,
Tum bhii nikal sako to chalo..
Kisii ke vaaste,
Raahein kahan badaltii hain..
Tum apane aap ko khud hii,
Badal sako to chalo..
Yahan kisii ko koi,
Raasta nahin detaa..
Mujhe giira ke agar,
Tum sambhal sako to chalo..
Yahii hai zindagii, kuchh Khwaab,
Chand ummeedein hai..
Inhi khilono se,
Tum bhii bahel sako to chalo..
its good, pretty darn good....
hmmm ... lekhak tau aap ho hi ache ..
Shayarana andaaz bhi khoob hai ..
Mashalllah ......
keep writing ....
Best Regards ,
tehzu
i liked the last one most.....ruely amazing and innocent love.....cool dude
keepsmiling
13/14 years old guy wrote thoseee :O they are deeply wonderful.
me too liked the last one the most :)
thanx for sharing them with us
Nush
STUNNED!
I have come to the end of my rope,
knowing you cannot see me,
nor the tears that flow from my eyes.
For so long I held on to you,
hoping in time the rough river
would become a peaceful stream....
I have lost faith, the dream has died.
On the day I die all will become clear,
this I know to be true.
But for now there is just numbness
and the silent acceptance of defeat.
I wish we had never met in real life,
for now I have lost you all together.
Goodbye my angel, have a safe flight.
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